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THE ART OF THE STORY-TELLER
by Marie L. Shedlock
PREFACE
Some day we shall have a science of education comparable to the
science
of medicine; but even when that day arrives the art of
education
will still remain the inspiration and the guide of all wise
teachers.
The laws that regulate our physical and mental development will be
reduced to order; but the impulses which lead each new generation to
play its way into possession of all that is best in life will still
have
to be interpreted for us by the artists who, with the wisdom of
years,
have not lost the direct vision of children.
Some years ago I heard Miss Shedlock tell stories in England. Her
fine
sense of literary and dramatic values, her power in sympathetic
interpretation, always restrained within the limits of the art she
was
using, and her understanding of educational values, based on a wide
experience of teaching, all marked her as an artist in story-
telling.
She was equally at home in interpreting the subtle blending of wit
and
wisdom in Daudet, the folk lore philosophy of Grimm, or the deeper
world
philosophy and poignant human appeal of Hans Christian Andersen.
Then she came to America and for two or three years she taught us
the
difference between the nightingale that sings in the tree tops and
the
artificial bird that goes with a spring. Cities like New York,
Boston,
Pittsburgh and Chicago listened and heard, if sometimes
indistinctly,
the notes of universal appeal, and children saw the Arabian Nights
come
true.
Yielding to the appeals of her friends in America and England, Miss
Shedlock has put together in this little book such observations and
suggestions on story-telling as can be put in words. Those who have
the
artist's spirit will find their sense of values quickened by her
words,
and they will be led to escape some of the errors into which even
the
greatest artists fall. And even those who tell stories with their
minds
will find in these papers wise generalizations and suggestions born
of
wide experience and extended study which well go far towards making
even
an artificial nightingale's song less mechanical. To those who
know,
the book is a revelation of the intimate relation between a child's
instincts and the finished art of dramatic presentation. To those
who
do not know it will bring echoes of reality.—Earl Barnes.
CONTENTS
PART I
THE ART OF STORY-TELLING
CHAPTER
I. THE DIFFICULTIES OF THE STORY
II. THE ESSENTIALS OF THE STORY
III. THE ARTIFICES OF STORY-TELLING
IV. ELEMENTS TO AVOID IN SELECTION OF MATERIAL
V. ELEMENTS TO SEEK IN THE CHOICE OF MATERIAL
VI. HOW TO OBTAIN AND MAINTAIN THE EFFECT OF THE
STORY
IV. ELEMENTS TO AVOID IN SELECTION OF MATERIAL
VII. QUESTIONS ASKED BY TEACHERS
PART II
THE STORIES
STURLA, THE HISTORIAN
A SAGA
THE LEGEND OF ST. CHRISTOPHER
ARTHUR IN THE CAVE
HAFIZ, THE STONE-CUTTER
TO YOUR GOOD HEALTH
THE PROUD COCK
SNEGOURKA
THE WATER NIXIE
THE BLUE ROSE
THE TWO FROGS
THE WISE OLD SHEPHERD
THE FOLLY OF PANIC
THE TRUE SPIRIT OF A FESTIVAL DAY
FILIAL PIETY
THREE STORIES FROM HANS CHRISTIAN ANDERSEN—
THE SWINEHERD
THE NIGHTINGALE
THE PRINCESS AND THE PEA
PART III
LIST OF STORIES
BOOKS SUGGESTED TO THE STORY-TELLER AND BOOKS
REFERRED TO IN THE LIST OF STORIES
INTRODUCTION
Story-telling is almost the oldest art in the world—the first
conscious form of literary communication. In the East it still
survives, and it is not an uncommon thing to see a crowd at a street
corner held by the simple narration of a story. There are signs in
the
West of a growing interest in this ancient art, and we may yet live
to
see the renaissance of the troubadours and the minstrels whose
appeal
will then rival that of the mob orator or itinerant politician. One
of
the surest signs of a belief in the educational power of the story
is
its introduction into the curriculum of the training-college and the
classes of the elementary and secondary schools. It is just at the
time
when the imagination is most keen, the mind being unhampered by
accumulation of facts, that stories appeal most vividly and are
retained
for all time.
It is to be hoped that some day stories will be told to school
groups
only by experts who have devoted special time and preparation to the
art
of telling them. It is a great fallacy to suppose that the
systematic
study of story-telling destroys the spontaneity of narrative. After
a
long experience, I find the exact converse to be true, namely, that
it
is only when one has overcome the mechanical difficulties that one
can
"let one's self go" in the dramatic interest of the story.
By the expert story-teller I do not mean the professional
elocutionist.
The name, wrongly enough, has become associated in the mind of the
public with persons who beat their breast, tear their hair, and
declaim
blood-curdling episodes. A decade or more ago, the drawing-room
reciter
was of this type, and was rapidly becoming the bugbear of social
gatherings. The difference between the stilted reciter and the
simple
story-teller is perhaps best illustrated by an episode in Hans
Christian
Andersen's immortal "Story of the Nightingale." The real
Nightingale
and the artificial Nightingale have been bidden by the Emperor to
unite
their forces and to sing a duet at a Court function. The duet turns
out
most disastrously, and while the artificial Nightingale is singing
his
one solo for the thirty-third time, the real Nightingale flies out
of
the window back to the green wood—a true artist, instinctively
choosing his right atmosphere. But the bandmaster—symbol of
the
pompous pedagogue—in trying to soothe the outraged feelings of
the
courtiers, says, "Because, you see, Ladies and Gentlemen, and above
all,
Your Imperial Majesty, with the real nightingale you never can tell
what
you will hear, but in the artificial nightingale everything is
decided
beforehand. So it is, and so it must remain. It cannot be
otherwise."
And as in the case of the two nightingales, so it is with the
stilted
reciter and the simple narrator: one is busy displaying the
machinery,
showing "how the tunes go"; the other is anxious to conceal the art.
Simplicity should be the keynote of story-telling, but (and her the
comparison with the nightingale breaks down) it is a simplicity
which
comes after much training in self-control, and much hard work in
overcoming the difficulties which beset the presentation.
I do not mean that there are not born story-tellers who could
hold an audience without preparation, but they are so rare in number
that we can afford to neglect them in our general consideration, for
this work is dedicated to the average story-tellers anxious to make
the
best use of their dramatic ability, and it is to them that I present
my
plea for special study and preparation before telling a story to a
group
of children—that is, if they wish for the far-reaching effects
I
shall speak of later on. Only the preparation must be of a much
less
stereotyped nature than that by which the ordinary reciters are
trained
for their career.
Some years ago, when I was in America, I was asked to put into the
form
of lectures my views as to the educational value of telling stories.
A
sudden inspiration seized me. I began to cherish a dream of long
hours
to be spent in the British Museum, the Congressional Library in
Washington and the Public Library in Boston—and this is the
only
portion of the dream which has been realized. I planned an
elaborate
scheme of research work which was to result in a magnificent (if
musty)
philological treatise. I thought of trying to discover by long and
patient researches what species of lullaby were crooned by Egyptian
mothers to their babes, and what were the elementary dramatic poems
in
vogue among Assyrian nursemaids which were the prototypes of "Little
Jack Horner," "Dickory, Dickory Dock" and other nursery classics. I
intended to follow up the study of these ancient documents by making
an
appendix of modern variants, showing what progress we had made
—if
any—among modern nations.
But there came to me suddenly one day the remembrance of a scene
from
Racine's "Plaideurs," in which the counsel for the defence, eager to
show how fundamental his knowledge, begins his speech: "Before the
Creation of the World"—And the Judge (with a touch of
weariness
tempered by humor) suggests:
"Let us pass on to the Deluge."
And thus I, too, have passed on to the Deluge. I have abandoned an
account of the origin and past of stories which at best would only
have
displayed a little recently acquired book knowledge. When I thought
of
the number of scholars who could treat this part of the question
infinitely better than myself, I realized how much wiser it would be
—though the task is more humdrum—to deal with the
present
possibilities of story-telling for our generation of parents and
teachers.
My objects in urging the use of stories in the education of children
are
at least fivefold:
First, to give them dramatic joy, for which they have a natural
craving;
to develop a sense of humor, which is really a sense of proportion;
to
correct certain tendencies by showing the consequences in the career
of
the hero in the story [Of this motive the children must be quite
unconscious and there should be no didactic emphasis]; to present by
means of example, not precept, such ideals as will sooner or later
be
translated into action; and finally, to develop the imagination,
which
really includes all the other points.
But the art of story-telling appeals not only to the educational
world
and to parents as parents, but also to a wider public interested in
the
subject from a purely human point of view.
In contrast to the lofty scheme I had originally proposed to myself,
I
now simply place before all those who are interested in the art of
story-telling in any form the practical experiences I have had in my
travels in America and England.
I hope that my readers may profit by my errors, improve on my
methods,
and thus help to bring about the revival of an almost lost art.
In Sir Philip Sydney's "Defence of Poesie: we find these words:
"Forsooth he cometh to you with a tale, which holdeth children from
play, and old men from the chimney-corner, and pretending no more,
doth
intend the winning of the mind from wickedness to virtue even as the
child is often brought to take most wholesome things by hiding them
in
such other as have a pleasant taste."
—MARIE L. SHEDLOCK, LONDON
PART I
THE ART OF THE STORY-TELLER.
THE DIFFICULTIES OF THE STORY
I propose to deal in this chapter with the difficulties or dangers
which
beset the path of the story-teller, because, until we have overcome
these, we cannot hope to bring out the full value of the story.
The difficulties are many, and yet they ought not to discourage the
would-be narrators, but only show them how all-important is the
preparation for the story, if it is to have the desired effect.
I propose to illustrate by concrete examples, thereby serving a
twofold
purpose: one to fix the subject more clearly in the mind of the
student,
the other to use the art of story-telling to explain itself.
I have chosen one or two instances from my own personal experience.
The
grave mistakes made in my own case may serve as a warning to others
who
will find, however, that experience is the best teacher. For
positive
work, in the long run, we generally find out our own method. On the
negative side, however, it is useful to have certain pitfalls
pointed
out to us, in order that we may save time by avoiding them. It is
for
this reason that I sound a note of warning.
1. There is the danger of side issues. An inexperienced
story-
teller is exposed to the temptation of breaking off from the main
dramatic interest in a short exciting story in order to introduce a
side
issue which is often interesting and helpful but which must be left
for
a longer and less dramatic story. If the interest turns on some
dramatic moment, the action must be quick and uninterrupted, or it
will
lose half its effect.
I had been telling a class of young children the story of Polyphemus
and
Ulysses, and just at the most dramatic moment in the story some
impulse
for which I cannot account prompted me to go off on a side issue to
describe the personal appearance of Ulysses.
The children were visibly bored, but with polite indifference they
listened to my elaborate description of the hero. If I had given
them
an actual description from Homer, I believe that the strength of the
language would have appealed to their imagination (all the more
strongly
because the might not have understood the individual words) and have
lessened their disappointment at the dramatic issue being postponed;
but
I trusted to my own lame verbal efforts, and signally failed.
Attention
flagged, fidgeting began, the atmosphere was rapidly becoming
spoiled in
spit of the patience and toleration still shown by the children. At
last, however, one little girl in the front row, as spokeswoman for
the
class, suddenly said: "If you please, before you go on any further,
do
you mind telling us whether, after all, that Poly . . . [slight
pause] .
. . that . . . [final attempt] . . . Polyanthus died?"
Now, the remembrance of this question has been of extreme use to me
in
my career as a story-teller. I have realized that in a short
dramatic
story the mind of the listeners must be set at ease with regard to
the
ultimate fate of the special Polyanthus who takes the center of the
stage.
I remember, too, the despair of a little boy at a dramatic
representation of "Little Red Riding-Hood," when that little person
delayed the thrilling catastrophe with the Wolf, by singing a
pleasant
song on her way through the wood. "Oh, why," said the little boy,
"does
she not get on?" And I quite shared his impatience.
This warning is necessary only in connection with the short dramatic
narrative. There are occasions when we can well afford to offer
short
descriptions for the sake of literary style, and for the purpose of
enlarging the vocabulary of the child. I have found, however, in
these
cases, it is well to take the children into your confidence, warning
them that they are to expect nothing particularly exciting in the
way of
dramatic event. They will then settle down with a freer mind
(though
the mood may include a touch of resignation) to the description you
are
about to offer them.
2. Altering the story to suit special occasions is done
sometimes from extreme conscientiousness, sometimes from sheer
ignorance
of the ways of children. It is the desire to protect them from
knowledge which they already possess and with which they, equally
conscientious, are apt to "turn and rend" the narrator. I remember
once
when I was telling the story of the Siege of Troy to very young
children, I suddenly felt anxious lest there should be anything in
the
story of the rape of Helen not altogether suitable for the average
age
of the class, namely, nine years. I threw, therefore, a domestic
coloring over the whole subject and presented an imaginary
conversation
between Paris and Helen, in which Paris tried to persuade Helen that
she
was strong-minded woman thrown away on a limited society in Sparta,
and
that she should come away and visit some of the institutions of the
world with him, which would doubtless prove a mutually instructive
journey[1]. I then gave the children the view taken by Herodotus
that
Helen never went to Troy, but was detained in Egypt. The children
were
much thrilled by the story, and responded most eagerly when, in my
inexperience, I invited them to reproduce in writing for the next
day
the story I had just told them. A small child presented me,
as
you will see, with the ethical problem from which I had so
laboriously
protected her. The essay ran:
Once upon a time the King of Troy's son was called Paris. And he
went
over to Greace to see what it was like. And here he saw the
beautiful Helener, and likewise her husband Menelayus.
And one day, Menelayus went out hunting, and left Paris and Helener
alone, and Paris said: "Do you not feel dul in this
palis?"[2] And Helener said: "I feel very dull in this
pallice
," and Paris said: "Come away and see the world with me." So
they
sliped off together, and they came to the King of Egypt, and
he said: "Who is the young lady"? So Paris told him.
"But,"
said the King, "it is not propper for you to go off with
other
people's wifes. So Helener shall stop here." Paris stamped
his
foot. When Menelayus got home, he stamped his foot. And he
called round him all his soldiers, and they stood round Troy for
eleven
years. At last they thought it was no use standing any
longer,
so they built a wooden horse in memory of Helener and the Trojans
and it
was taken into the town.
Now, the mistake I made in my presentation was to lay any particular
stress on the reason for elopement by my careful readjustment, which
really called more attention to the episode than was necessary for
the
age of my audience; and evidently caused confusion in the minds of
some
of the children who knew the story in its more accurate original
form.
While traveling in America, I was provided with a delightful
appendix to
this story. I had been telling Miss Longfellow and her sister the
little girl's version of the Siege of Troy, and Mrs. Thorpe made the
following comment, with the American humor the dryness of which adds
so
much to its value:
"I never realized before," she said, "how glad the Greeks must have
been
to sit down even inside a horse, when they had been standing
for
eleven years."
3. The danger of introducing unfamiliar words is the very
opposite danger of the one to which I have just alluded; it is the
taking for granted that children are acquainted with the meaning of
certain words upon which turns some important point in the story.
We
must not introduce, without at least a passing explanation, words
which,
if not rightly understood, would entirely alter the picture we wish
to
present.
I had once promised to tell stories to an audience of Irish
peasants,
and I should like to state here that, though my travels have brought
me
in touch with almost every kind of audience, I have never found one
where the atmosphere is so "self-prepared" as in that of a group of
Irish peasants. To speak to them, especially on the subject of
fairy-
tales, is like playing on a delicate harp: the response is so quick
and
the sympathy so keen. Of course, the subject of fairy-tales is one
which is completely familiar to them and comes into their everyday
life.
They have a feeling of awe with regard to fairies, which is very
deep in
some parts of Ireland.
On this particular occasion I had been warned by an artist friend
who
had kindly promised to sing songs between the stories, that my
audience
would be of varying age and almost entirely illiterate. Many of the
older men and women, who could neither read nor write, had never
been
beyond their native village. I was warned to be very simple in my
language and to explain any difficult words which might occur in the
particular Indian story I had chosen for that night, namely, "The
Tiger,
the Jackal and the Brahman."[3]—at a proper distance, however,
lest the audience should class him with the wild animals. I then
went
on with my story, in the course of which I mentioned a buffalo. In
spite of the warning I had received, I found it impossible not to
believe that the name of this animal would be familiar to any
audience.
I, therefore, went on with the sentence containing this word, and
ended
it thus: "And then the Brahman went a little further and met an old
buffalo turning a wheel."
The next day, while walking down the village street, I entered into
conversation with a thirteen-year-old girl who had been in my
audience
the night before and who began at once to repeat in her own words
the
Indian story in questions. When she came to the particular sentence
I
have just quoted, I was greatly startled to hear her version,
which ran thus: "And the priest went on a little further, and he met
another old gentleman pushing a wheelbarrow." I stopped her at
once,
and not being able to identify the sentence as part of the story I
had
told, I questioned her a little more closely. I found that the word
"buffalo," had evidently conveyed to her mind an old "buffer" whose
name
was "Lo," probably taken to be an Indian form of appellation, to be
treated with tolerance though it might not be Irish in sound. Then,
not
knowing of any wheel more familiarly than that attached to a barrow,
the
young narrator completed the picture in her own mind—but
which,
one must admit, had lost something of the Indian atmosphere which I
had
intended to gather about.
4. The danger of claiming coöperation of the class by means
of
questions is more serious for the teacher than the child, who
rather
enjoys the process and displays a fatal readiness to give any sort
of
answer if only he can play a part in the conversation. If we could
in
any way depend on the children giving the kind of answer we expect,
all
might go well and the danger would be lessened; but children have a
perpetual way of frustrating our hopes in this direction, and of
landing
us in unexpected bypaths from which it is not always easy to return
to
the main road without a very violent reaction. As illustrative of
this,
I quote from the "The Madness of Philip," by Josephine Daskam Bacon,
a
truly delightful essay on child psychology in the guise of the
lightest
of stories.
The scene takes place in a kindergarten, where a bold and fearless
visitor has undertaken to tell a story on the spur of the moment to
a
group of restless children.
She opens thus:
"Yesterday, children, as I came out of my yard, what do you think I
saw?"
The elaborately concealed surprise in store was so obvious that
Marantha
rose to the occasion and suggested, "An el'phunt."
"Why, no. Why should I see an elephant in my yard? It was not
nearly so big as that—it was a little thing."
"A fish," ventured Eddy Brown, whose eye fell upon the aquarium in
the
corner. The raconteuse smiled patiently.
"Now, how could a fish, a live fish, get into my front yard?"
"A dead fish," says Eddy.
He had never been known to relinquish voluntarily an idea.
"No; it was a little kitten," said the story-teller decidedly. "A
little white kitten. She was standing right near a big puddle of
water.
Now, what else do you think I saw?"
"Another kitten," suggests Marantha, conservatively.
"No; it was a big Newfoundland dog. He saw the little kitten near
the
water. Now, cats don't like water, do they? What do they like?"
"Mice," said Joseph Zukoffsky abruptly.
"Well, yes, they do; but there were no mice in my yard. I'm sure
you
know what I mean. If they don't like water, what do
they
like?"
"Milk," cried Sarah Fuller confidently.
"They like a dry place," said Mrs. R. B. Smith. "Now, what do you
suppose the dog did?"
It may be that successive failures had disheartened the listeners.
It
may be that the very range of choice presented to them and the dog
alike
dazzled their imagination. At all events, they made no answer.
"Nobody knows what the dog did?" repeated the story-teller
encouragingly. "What would you do if you saw a little kitten like
that?"
And Philip remarked gloomily:
"I'd pull its tail."
"And what do the rest of you think? I hope you are not as cruel as
that
little boy."
A jealous desire to share Philip's success prompted the quick
response:
"I'd pull it too."
Now, the reason of the total failure of this story was the inability
to
draw any real response from the children, partly because of the
hopeless
vagueness of the questions, partly because, there being no time for
reflection, children say the first thing that comes into their heads
without any reference to their real thoughts on the subject.
I cannot imagine anything less like the enlightened methods of the
best
kindergarten teaching. Had Mrs. R. B. Smith been a real, and not a
fictional, person, it would certainly have been her last appearance
as a
raconteuse in this educational institution.
5. The difficulty of gauging the effect of a story upon the
audience
rises from lack of observation and experience; it is the want
of
these qualities which leads to the adoption of such a method as I
have
just presented. We learn in time that want of expression on the
faces
of the audience and want of any kind of external response do not
always
mean either lack of interest or attention. There is often real
interest
deep down, but no power, or perhaps no wish, to display that
interest,
which is deliberately concealed at times so as to protect oneself
from
questions which may be put.
6. The danger of over illustration. After long experience,
and
after considering the effect produced on children when pictures are
shown to them during the narration, I have come to the conclusion
that
the appeal to the eye and the ear at the same time is of doubtful
value,
and has, generally speaking, a distracting effect: the concentration
on
one channel of communication attracts and holds the attention more
completely. I was confirmed in this theory when I addressed an
audience
of blind people[4] for the first time, and noticed how closely they
attended, and how much easier it seemed to them because they were so
completely "undistracted by the sights around them."
I have often suggested to young teachers two experiments in support
of
this theory. They are not practical experiments, nor could they be
repeated often with the same audience, but they are intensely
interesting, and they serve to show the actual effect of
appealing to one sense at a time. The first of these experiments is
to
take a small group of children and suggest that they should close
their
eyes while you tell them a story. You will then notice how much
more
attention is given to the intonation and inflection of the voice.
The
reason is obvious. With nothing to distract the attention, it is
concentrated on the only thing offered the listeners, that is,
sound, to
enable them to seize the dramatic interest of the story.
We find an example of the dramatic power of the voice in its appeal
to
the imagination in one of the tributes brought by an old pupil to
Thomas
Edward Brown, Master at Clifton College:
"My earliest recollection is that his was the most vivid teaching I
ever
received; great width of view and poetical, almost passionate, power
of
presentment. We were reading Froude's History, and I shall never
forget
how it was Brown's words, Brown's voice, not the historian's, that
made
me feel the great democratic function which the monasteries
performed in
England; the view became alive in his mouth." And in another
passage:
"All set forth with such dramatic force and aided by such a splendid
voice, left an indelible impression on my mind."[5]
A second experiment, and a much more subtle and difficult one, is to
take the same group of children on another occasion, telling them a
story in pantomime form, giving them first the briefest outline of
the
story. In this case it must be of the simplest construction, until
the
children are able, if you continue the experiment, to look for
something
more subtle.
I have never forgotten the marvelous performance of a play given in
London many years ago entirely in pantomime form. The play was
called
"L'Enfant Prodigue," and was presented by a company of French
artists.
It would be almost impossible to exaggerate the strength of that
"silent
appeal" to the public. One was so unaccustomed to reading meaning
and
development of character into gesture and facial expression that it
was
really a revelation to most of those present—certainly to all
Anglo-Saxons.
I cannot touch on this subject without admitting the enormous
dramatic
value connected with the cinematograph. Though it can never take
the
place of an actual performance, whether in story form or on the
stage,
it has a real educational value in its possibilities of
representation
which it is difficult to overestimate, and I believe that its
introduction into the school curriculum, under the strictest
supervision, will be of extraordinary benefit. The movement, in its
present chaotic condition, and in the hands of commercial
management, is
more likely to stifle than to awaken or stimulate the imagination,
but
the educational world is fully alive to the danger, and I am
convinced
that in the future of the movement good will predominate.
The real value of the cinematograph in connection with stories is
that
it provides the background that is wanting to the inner vision of
the
average child, and does not prevent its imagination from filling in
the
details later. For instance, it would be quite impossible for the
average child to get an idea from mere word-painting of the
atmosphere
of the polar regions as represented lately on the film in connection
with Captain Scott's expedition, but any stories told later on about
these regions would have an infinitely greater interest.
There is, however, a real danger in using pictures to illustrate the
story, especially if it be one which contains a direct appeal to the
imagination of the child and one quite distinct from the stories
which
deal with facts, namely, that you force the whole audience of
children
to see the same picture, instead of giving each individual child the
chance of making his own mental picture. That is of far greater
joy,
and of much great educational value, since by this process the child
coöperates with you instead of having all the work done for
him.
Queyrat, in his works on "La Logique chez l'Enfant," quotes Madame
Necker de Saussure:[6] "To children and animals actual objects
present
themselves, not the terms of their manifestations. For them
thinking is
seeing over again, it is going through the sensations that the real
object would have produced. Everything which goes on within them is
in
the form of pictures, or rather, inanimate scenes in which life is
partially reproduced. . . . Since the child has, as yet, no capacity
for
abstraction, he finds a stimulating power in words and a suggestive
inspiration which holds him enchanted. They awaken vividly colored
images, pictures far more brilliant than would be called into being
by
the objects themselves."
Surely, if this be true, we are taking from children that rare power
of mental visualization by offering to their outward vision an
actual
picture.
I was struck with the following note by a critic of the Outlook
,
referring to a Japanese play but which bears quite directly on the
subject in hand.
"First, we should be inclined to put insistence upon appeal by
imagination. Nothing is built up by lath and canvas; everything
has
to be created by the poet's speech."
He alludes to the decoration of one of the scenes which consists of
three pines, showing what can be conjured up in the mind of the
spectator.
Ah, yes. Unfolding now before my eyes
The views I know: the Forest, River, Sea
And Mist—the scenes of Ono now expand.
I have often heard objections raised to this theory by teachers
dealing
with children whose knowledge of objects outside their own circle is
so
scanty that words we use without a suspicion that they are
unfamiliar
are really foreign expressions to them. Such words as sea, woods,
fields, mountains, would mean nothing to them, unless some
explanation
were offered. To these objections I have replied that where we are
dealing with objects that can actually be seen with the bodily eyes,
then it is quite legitimate to show pictures before you begin the
story,
so that the distraction between the actual and mental presentation
may
not cause confusion; but, as the foregoing example shows, we should
endeavor to accustom the children to seeing much more than mere
objects
themselves, and in dealing with abstract qualities we must rely
solely
on the power and choice of words and dramatic qualities of
presentation,
and we need not feel anxious if the response is not immediate, nor
even
if it is not quick and eager.[7]
7. The danger of obscuring the point of the story with too many
details is not peculiar to teachers, nor is it shown only in the
narrative form. I have often heard really brilliant after-dinner
stories marred by this defect. One remembers the attempt made by
Sancho
Panza to tell a story to Don Quixote. I have always felt a keen
sympathy with the latter in his impatience over the recital.
"In a village of Estramadura there was a shepherd—no, I mean a
goatherd—which shepherd or goatherd as my story says, was
called
Lope Ruiz—and this Lope Ruiz was in love with a shepherdess
called
Torralva, who was daughter to a rich herdsman, and this rich
herdsman
——"
"If this be thy story, Sancho," said Don Quixote, "thou wilt not
have
done these two days. Tell it concisely, like a man of sense, or
else
say no more."
"I tell it in the manner they tell all stories in my country,"
answered
Sancho, "and I cannot tell it otherwise, nor ought your Worship to
require me to make new customs."
"Tell it as thou wilt, then," said Don Quixote, "since it is the
will of
fate that I should here it, go on."
Sancho continued:
"He looked about him until he espied a fisherman with a boat near
him,
but so small that it could only hold one person and one goat. The
fisherman got into the boat and carried over on goat; he returned
and
carried another; he came back again and carried another. Pray, sir,
keep an account of the goats which the fisherman is carrying over,
for
if you lose count of a single one, the story ends, and it will be
impossible to tell a word more. . . . I go on, then. . . . He
returned
for another goat, and another, and another and another——
"
"Suppose them all carried over," said Don Quixote, "or thou
wilt
not have finished carrying them this twelve months!"
"Tell me, how many have passed already?" said Sancho.
"How should I know?" answered Don Quixote.
"See there, now! Did I not tell thee to keep an exact account?
There
is an end of the story. I can go no further."
"How can this be?" said Don Quixote. "Is it so essential to the
story
to know the exact number of goats that passed over, that if one
error be
made the story can proceed no further?"
"Even so," said Sancho Panza.
8. The danger of overexplanation is fatal to the artistic
success of any story, but it is even more serious in connection with
stories told from an educational point of view, because it hampers
the
imagination of the listener, and since the development of that
faculty
is one of our chief aims in telling these stories, we must leave
free
play, we must not test the effect, as I have said before, by the
material method of asking questions. My own experience is that the
fewer explanations you offer, provided you have been careful with
the
choice of your material and artistic in the presentation, the more
the
child will supplement by his own thinking power what is necessary
for
the understanding of the story.
Queyrat says: "A child has no need of seizing on the exact meaning
of
words; on the contrary, a certain lack of
precision seems to stimulate his imagination only the more
vigorously,
since it gives him a broader liberty and firmer independence."[8]
9. The danger of lowering the standard of the story in order
to
appeal to the undeveloped taste of the child is a special one. I am
alluding here only to the story which is presented from the
educational
point of view. There are moments of relaxation in a child's life,
as in
that of an adult, when a lighter taste can be gratified. I allude
now
to the standard of story for school purposes.
There is one development of story-telling which seems to have been
very
little considered, either in America or in our own country, namely,
the
telling of stories to old people, and that not only in
institutions or in quiet country villages, but in the heart of the
busy
cities and in the homes of these old people. How often, when the
young
people are able to enjoy outside amusements, the old people,
necessarily
confined to the chimney-corner and many unable to read much for
themselves, might return to the joy of their childhood by hearing
some
of the old stories told them in dramatic form. Here is a delightful
occupation for those of the leisured class who have the gift, and a
much
more effective way of reading aloud.
Lady Gregory, in talking to the workhouse folk in Ireland, was moved
by
the strange contrast between the poverty of the tellers and the
splendors of the tale. She says:
"The stories they love are of quite visionary things; of swans that
turn
into kings' daughters, and of castles with crowns over the doors,
and of
lovers' flights on the backs of eagles, and music-loving witches,
and
journeys to the other world, and sleeps that last for seven hundred
years."
I fear it is only the Celtic imagination that will glory in such
romantic material; but I am sure the men and women of the poorhouse
are
much more interested than we are apt to think in stories outside the
small circle of their lives.
THE ESSENTIALS OF THE STORY
It would be a truism to suggest that dramatic instinct and dramatic
power of expression are naturally the first essentials for success
in
the art of story-telling, and that, without these, no story-teller
would
go very far; but I maintain that, even with these gifts, no high
standard of performance will be reached without certain other
qualities,
among the first of which I place apparent simplicity, which
is
really the art of concealing the art.
I am speaking here of the public story-teller, or of the teacher
with a
group of children, not the spontaneous (and most rare) power of
telling
stories such as Béranger gives us in his poem, "Souvenirs du
Peuple":
Mes enfants, dans ce village,
Suivi de rois, il passa;
Voilà bien longtemps de celà!
Je venais d'entrer en ménage,
À pied grimpant le coteau,
Où pour voir je m'étais mise.
Il avait petit chapeau et redingote grise.
Il me dit: Bon jour, ma chère.
Il vous a parlé, grand mère?
Il vous a parlé?
I am skeptical enough to think that it is not the spontaneity of the
grandmother but the art of Béranger which enhances the effect
of
the story told in the poem.
This intimate form of narration, which is delightful in its special
surroundings, would fail to reach, much less hold, a
large
audience, not because of its simplicity, but often because of the
want
of skill in arranging material and of the artistic sense of
selection
which brings the interest to a focus and arranges the side lights.
In
short, the simplicity we need for the ordinary purpose is that which
comes from ease and produces a sense of being able to let ourselves
go,
because we have thought out our effects. It is when we translate
our
instinct into art that the story becomes finished and complete.
I find it necessary to emphasize this point because people are apt
to
confuse simplicity of delivery with carelessness of utterance, loose
stringing of sentences of which the only connections seem to be the
ever-recurring use of "and" and "so," and "er . . .," this latter
inarticulate sound having done more to ruin a story and distract the
audience than many more glaring errors of dramatic form.
Real simplicity holds the audience because the lack of apparent
effort
in the artist has the most comforting effect upon the listener. It
is
like turning from the whirring machinery of process to the finished
article, which bears no traces of the making except the harmony and
beauty of the whole, which make one realize that the individual
parts
have received all proper attention. What really brings about this
apparent simplicity which insures the success of the story? It has
been
admirably expressed in a passage from Henry James' lecture on
Balzac:
"The fault in the artist which amounts most completely to a failure
of
dignity is the absence of saturation with his idea. When
saturation fails, no other real presence avails, as when, on the
other
hand, it operates, no failure of method fatally interferes."
I now offer two illustrations of the effect of this saturation, one
to
show that the failure of method does not prevent successful effect,
the
other to show that when it is combined with the necessary secondary
qualities the perfection of the art is reached.
In illustration of the first point, I recall an experience in the
north
of England when the head mistress of an elementary school asked me
to
hear a young inexperienced girl tell a story to a group of very
small
children.
When she began, I felt somewhat hopeless, because of the complete
failure of method. She seemed to have all the faults most damaging
to
the success of a speaker. Her voice was harsh, her gestures
awkward,
her manner was restless and melodramatic; but, as she went on I soon
began to discount all these faults and, in truth, I soon forgot
about
them, for so absorbed was she in her story, so saturated with her
subject, that she quickly communicated her own interest to her
audience,
and the children were absolutely spellbound.
The other illustration is connected with a memorable peep behind the
stage, when the late M. Coquelin had invited me to see him in the
greenroom between the first and second acts of "L'abbé
Constantin," one of the plays given during his last season in
London,
the year before his death. The last time I had met M. Coquelin was
at a
dinner party, where I had been dazzled by the brilliant conversation
of
this great artist in the rôle of a man of the world. But on
this
occasion I met the simple, kindly priest, so absorbed in his
rôle
that he inspired me with the wish to offer a donation for his poor,
and,
on taking leave, to ask for his blessing for myself. While talking
to
him, I had felt puzzled. It was only when I had left him that I
realized what had happened, namely, that he was too thoroughly
saturated
with his subject to be able to drop his rôle during the
interval,
in order to assume the more ordinary one of host and man of the
world.
Now, it is this spirit I would wish to inculcate into the would-be
story-tellers. If they would apply themselves in this manner to
their
work, it would bring about a revolution in the art of presentation,
that
is, in the art of teaching. The difficulty of the practical
application
of this theory is the constant plea, on the part of teachers, that
there
is not the time to work for such a standard in an art which is so
apparently simple that the work expended on it would never be
appreciated.
My answer to this objection is that, though the counsel of
perfection
would be to devote a great deal of time to the story, so as to
prepare
the atmosphere quite as much as the mere action of the little drama
(just as photographers use time exposure to obtain sky effects, as
well
as the more definite objects in the picture), yet it is not so much
a
question of time as concentration on the subject, which is one of
the
chief factors in the preparation of the story.
So many story-tellers are satisfied with cheap results, and most
audiences are not critical enough to encourage a high standard.[9]
The
method of "showing the machinery" has more immediate results, and it
is
easy to become discouraged over the drudgery which is not necessary
to
secure the approbation of the largest number. But, since I am
dealing
with the essentials of really good story-telling, I may be pardoned
for
suggesting the highest standard and the means for reaching it.
Therefore, I maintain that capacity for work, and even drudgery, is
among the essentials of story-telling. Personally, I know of
nothing
more interesting than watching the story grow gradually from mere
outline into a dramatic whole. It is the same pleasure, I imagine,
which is felt over the gradual development of a beautiful design on
a
loom. I do not mean machine-made work, which has to be done under
adverse conditions in a certain time and which is similar to
thousands
of other pieces of work; but that work, upon which we can bestow
unlimited time and concentrated thought.
The special joy in the slowly-prepared story comes in the exciting
moment when the persons, or even the inanimate objects, become alive
and
move as of themselves. I remember spending two or three
discouraging
weeks with Andersen's story of the "Adventures of a Beetle." I
passed
through times of great depression, because all the little creatures,
beetles, ear-wigs, frogs, etc., behaved in such a conventional way,
instead of displaying the strong individuality which Andersen had
bestowed upon them that I began to despair of presenting a live
company
at all.
But one day, the Beetle, so to speak, "took the stage," and
at
once there was life and animation among the minor characters. Then
the
main work was done, and there remained only the comparatively easy
task
of guiding the movement of the little drama, suggesting side issues
and
polishing the details, always keeping a careful eye on the Beetle,
that
he might "gang his ain gait" and preserve to the full his own
individuality.
There is a tendency in preparing stories to begin with detail work,
often a gesture or side issue which one has remembered from hearing
a
story told, but if this is done before the contemplative period,
only
scrappy, jerky and ineffective results are obtained, on which one
cannot
count for dramatic effects. This kind of preparation reminds one of
a
young peasant woman who was taken to see a performance of "Wilhelm
Tell," and when questioned as to the plot could only sum it up
saying,
"I know some fruit was shot at."[10]
I realize the extreme difficulty teachers have to devote the
necessary
time to perfecting the stories they tell in school, because this is
only
one of the subjects they have to teach in an already over-crowded
curriculum. To them I would offer this practical advice: Do not be
afraid to repeat your stories.[11] If you do not undertake more
than
seven stories a year, chosen with infinite care, and if you repeated
these stories six times during the year of forty-two weeks, you
would be
able to do artistic and, therefore, lasting work; you would also be
able
to avoid the direct moral application, for each time a child hears a
story artistically told, a little more of the meaning underlying the
simple story will come to him without any explanation on your part.
The
habit of doing one's best instead of one's second-best means, in the
long run, that one has no interest except in the preparation of the
best, and the stories, few in number, polished and finished in
style,
will have an effect of which one can scarcely overstate the
importance.
In the story of the "Swineherd," Hans Andersen says:
"On the grave of the Prince's father there grew a rose-tree. It
only
bloomed once in five years, and only bore one rose. But what a
rose!
Its perfume was so exquisite that whoever smelt it forgot at once
all
his cares and sorrows."
Lafcadio Hearn says:
"Time weeds out the errors and stupidities of cheap success, and
presents the Truth. It takes, like the aloe, a long time to flower,
but
the blossom is all the more precious when it appears."
THE ARTIFICES OF STORY-TELLING
By this term I do not mean anything against the gospel of simplicity
which I am so constantly preaching, but, for want of a better term,
I
use the word "artifice" to express the mechanical devices by which
we
endeavor to attract and hold the attention of the audience. The art
of
telling stories is, in truth, much more difficult than acting a part
on
the stage: First, because the narrator is responsible for the whole
drama and the whole atmosphere which surrounds it. He has to live
the
life of each character and understand the relation which each bears
to
the whole. Secondly, because the stage is a miniature one, gestures
and
movements must all be so adjusted as not to destroy the sense of
proportion. I have often noticed that actors, accustomed to the
more
roomy public stage, are apt to be too broad in their gestures and
movements when they tell a story. The special training for the
story-
teller should consist not only in the training of the voice and in
choice of language, but above all in power of delicate suggestion,
which
cannot always be used on the stage because this is hampered by the
presence of actual things. The story-teller has to present
these
things to the more delicate organism of the "inward eye."
So deeply convinced am I of the miniature character of the story-
telling art that I believe one never gets a perfectly artistic
presentation of this kind in a very large hall or before a very
large
audience.
I have made experiments along this line, having twice told a story
to an
audience in America[12] exceeding five thousand, but on both
occasions,
though the dramatic reaction upon oneself from the response of so
large
an audience was both gratifying and stimulating, I was forced to
sacrifice the delicacy of the story and to take from its artistic
value
by the necessity of emphasis, in order to be heard by all present.
Emphasis is the bane of all story-telling, for it destroys the
delicacy, and the whole performance suggests a struggle in conveying
the
message. The indecision of the victory leaves the audience restless
and
unsatisfied.
Then, again, as compared with acting on the stage, in telling a
story
one misses the help of effective entrances and exits, the
footlights,
the costume, the facial expression of your fellow-actor which
interprets
so much of what you yourself say without further elaboration on your
part; for, in the story, in case of a dialogue which necessitates
great
subtlety and quickness in facial expression and gesture, one has to
be
both speaker and listener.
Now, of what artifices can we make use to take the place of all the
extraneous help offered to actors on the stage? First and foremost,
as
a means of suddenly pulling up the attention of the audience, is the
judicious art of pausing. For those who have not actually had
experience in the matter, this advice will seem trite and
unnecessary,
but those who have even a little experience will realize with me the
extraordinary efficacy of this very simple means. It is really what
Coquelin spoke of as a "high light," where the interest is focused,
as
it were, to a point.
I have tried this simple art of pausing with every kind of
audience, and I have rarely know it to fail. It is very difficult
to
offer a concrete example of this, unless one is giving a "live"
representation, but I shall make an attempt, and at least I shall
hope
to make myself understood by those who have heard me tell stories.
In Hans Andersen's "Princess and the Pea," the King goes down to
open
the door himself. Now, one may make this point in two ways. One
may
either say: "And then the King went to the door, and at the door
there
stood a real Princess," or, "And then the King went to the door, and
at
the door there stood—(pause)—a real Princess."
It is difficult to exaggerate the difference of effect produced by
so
slight a pause.[13] With children it means an unconscious curiosity
which expresses itself in a sudden muscular tension. There is just
time
during that instant's pause to feel, though not to
formulate
, the question: "What is standing at the door?" By this means,
half
your work of holding the attention is accomplished. It is not
necessary
for me to enter into the psychological reason of this, but I
strongly
recommend those who are interested in the question to read the
chapter
in Ribot's work on this subject, "Essai sur L'Imagination Cré
atrice," as well as Mr. Keatinge's work on "Suggestion."
I would advise all teachers to revise their stories with a view to
introducing the judicious pause, and to vary its use according to
the
age, the number, and, above all, the mood of the audience.
Experience
alone can insure success in this matter. It has taken me many years
to
realize the importance of this artifice.
Among other means for holding the attention of the audience and
helping to bring out the points of the story is the use of gesture.
I
consider, however, that it must be a sparing use, and not of a broad
or
definite character. We shall never improve on the advice given by
Hamlet to the actors on this subject: "See that ye o'erstep not the
modesty of Nature."
And yet, perhaps it is not necessary to warn story-tellers against
abuse
of gesture. It is more helpful to encourage them in the use of it,
especially in Anglo-Saxon countries, where we are fearful of
expressing
ourselves in this way, and when we do the gesture often lacks
subtlety.
The Anglo-Saxon, when he does move at all, moves in solid blocks
—a
whole arm, a whole leg, the whole body—but if one watches a
Frenchman or an Italian in conversation, one suddenly realizes how
varied and subtle are the things which can be suggested by the mere
turn
of the wrist or the movement of a finger. The power of the hand has
been so wonderfully summed up in a passage from Quintillian that I
am
justified in offering it to all those who wish to realize what can
be
done by a gesture:
"As to the hands, without the aid of which all delivery would be
deficient and weak, it can scarcely be told of what a variety of
motions
they are susceptible, since they almost equal in expression the
power of
language itself. For other parts of the body assist the speaker,
but
these, I may almost say, speak themselves. With our hands we ask,
promise, call persons to us and send them away, threaten,
supplicate,
intimate dislike or fear; with out hands we signify joy, grief,
doubt,
acknowledgement, penitence, and indicate measure, quantity, number
and
time. Have not our hands the power of inciting, of restraining, or
beseeching, of testifying approbation? . . . So that amidst the
great
diversity of tongues pervading all nations and people, the language
of
the hands appears to be a language common to all men."[14]
One of the most effective of artifices in telling stories to young
children is the use of mimicry—the imitation of animals'
voices
and sound in general is of never-ending joy to the listeners.
However,
I should wish to introduce a note of grave warning in connection
with
this subject. This special artifice can only be used by such
narrators
as have special aptitude and gifts in this direction. There are
many
people with good imaginative power but who are wholly lacking in the
power of mimicry, and their efforts in this direction, however
painstaking, remain grotesque and therefore ineffective. When
listening
to such performances, of which children are strangely critical, one
is
reminded of the French story in which the amateur animal painter is
showing her picture to an undiscriminating friend:
"Ah!" says the friend, "this is surely meant for a lion?"
"No," says the artist (?), with some slight show of temper, "it is
my
little lap-dog."
Another artifice which is particularly successful with very small
children is to insure their attention by inviting their coö
peration
before one actually begins the story. The following has proved
quite
effective as a short introduction to my stories when I was
addressing
large audiences of children:
"Do you know that last night I had a very strange dream, which I am
going to tell you before I begin the stories? I dreamed that I was
walking along the streets of —— [here would follow the
town
in which I happened to be speaking], with a large bundle on my
shoulders, and this bundle was full of stories which I had been
collecting all over the world in different countries; and I was
shouting
at the top of my voice: 'Stories! Stories! Stories! Who will listen
to
my stories?' And the children came flocking round me in my dream,
saying: 'Tell us your stories. We will listen to your
stories.' So I pulled out a story from my big bundle and I began in
a
most excited way, "Once upon a time there lived a King and a Queen
who
had no children, and they——' Here a little boy, very
much like that little boy I see sitting in the front row, stopped
me,
saying: 'Oh, I know that old story: it's Sleeping Beauty.'
"So I pulled out a second story, and began: 'Once upon a time there
was
a little girl who was sent by her mother to visit her grandmother
——' Then a little girl, so much like the one
sitting
at the end of the second row, said: 'Oh! everybody knows that story!
It's——'"
Here I would like to make a judicious pause, and then the children
in
the audience would shout in chorus, with joyful superiority: "Little
Red
Riding-Hood!" before I had time to explain that the children in my
dream
had done the same.
This method I repeated two or three times, being careful to choose
very
well-known stories. By this time the children were all encouraged
and
stimulated. I usually finished with congratulations on the number
of
stories they knew, expressing a hope that some of those I was going
to
tell that afternoon would be new to them. I have rarely found this
plan
to fail to establish a friendly relation between oneself and the
juvenile audience. It is often a matter of great difficulty, not to
win the attention of an audience but to keep it, and one
of
the most subtle artifices is to let the audience down (without their
perceiving it) after a dramatic situation, so that the reaction may
prepare them for the interest of the next situation.
An excellent instance of this is to be found in Rudyard Kipling's
story
of "The Cat That Walked . . ." where the repetition of words acts as
a
sort of sedative until one realizes the beginning of a fresh
situation.
The great point is never to let the audience quite down, that is, in
stories which depend on dramatic situations. It is just a question
of
shade and color in the language. If you are telling a story in
sections, and one spread over two or three occasions, you should
always
stop at an exciting moment. It encourages speculation in the
children's
minds, which increases their interest when the story is taken up
again.
Another very necessary quality in the mere artifice of story-telling
is
to watch your audience, so as to be able to know whether its mood is
for
action or reaction, and to alter your story accordingly. The moods
of
reaction are rarer, and you must use them for presenting a different
kind of material. Here is your opportunity for introducing a piece
of
poetic description, given in beautiful language, to which the
children
cannot listen when they are eager for action and dramatic
excitement.
Perhaps one of the greatest artifices is to take a quick hold of
your
audience by a striking beginning which will enlist their attention
from
the start. You can then relax somewhat, but you must be careful
also of
the end because that is what remains most vivid to the children. If
you
question them as to which story they like best in a program, you
will
constantly find it to be the last one you have told, which has for
the
moment blurred out the others.
Here are a few specimens of beginnings which seldom fail to arrest
the
attention of the child:
"There was once a giant ogre, and he lived in a cave by himself."
From
"The Giant and Jack-straws," David Starr Jordan.
"There were once twenty-five tin soldiers, who were all brothers,
for
they had been made out of the same old tin spoon." From "The Tin
Soldier," Hans Christian Andersen.
"There was once an Emperor who had a horse shod with gold." From
"The
Beetle," Hans Christian Andersen.
"There was once a merchant who was so rich that he could have paved
the
whole street with gold, and even then he would have had enough for a
small alley." From the "The Flying Trunk," Hans Christian Andersen.
"There was once a shilling which came forth from the mint springing
and shouting, 'Hurrah! Now I am going out into the wide world.'"
From
"The Silver Shilling," Hans Christian Andersen.
"In the High and Far Off Times the Elephant, O Best Beloved, had no
trunk." From "The Elephant's Child": "Just So Stories," Rudyard
Kipling.
"Not always was the Kangaroo as now we behold him, but a Different
Animal with four short legs." From "Old Man Kangaroo": "Just So
Stories," Rudyard Kipling.
"Whichever way I turn," said the weather-cock on a high steeple, "no
one
is satisfied." From "Fire-side Fables," Edwin Barrow.
"A set of chessmen, left standing on their board, resolved to alter
the
rules of the game." From the same source.
"The Pink Parasol had tender whalebone ribs and a slender stick of
cherry-wood." From "Very Short Stories," Mrs. W. K. Clifford.
"There was once a poor little Donkey on Wheels: it had never wagged
its
tail, or tossed its head, or said 'Hee-haw,' or tasted a tender
thistle." From the same source.
Now, some of these beginnings are, of course, for very young
children,
but they all have the same advantage, that of plunging in medias
res
, and, therefore, arrest attention at once, contrary to the
stories
which open on a leisurely note of description.
In the same way we must be careful about the endings of stories.
They
must impress themselves either in a very dramatic climax to which
the
whole story has worked up, as in the following:
"Then he goes out the Wet Wild Woods, or up the Wet Wild Trees, or
on
the Wet Wild Roofs, waving his Wild Tail, and walking by his Wild
Lone."
From "Just So Stories," Rudyard Kipling.
Or by an anti-climax for effect:
"We have all this straight from the alderman's newspaper, but it is
not
to be depended on." From "Jack the Dullard," Hans Christian
Andersen.
Or by evading the point:
"Whoever does not believe this must buy shares in the Tanner's
yard."
From A Great Grief," Hans Christian Andersen.
Or by some striking general comment:
"He has never caught up with the three days he missed at the
beginning of the world, and he has never learnt how to behave."
From
"How the Camel got his Hump": "Just So Stories," Rudyard Kipling.
I have only suggested in this chapter a few of the artifices which I
have found useful in my own experience, but I am sure that many more
might be added.
ELEMENTS TO AVOID IN THE SELECTION OF MATERIAL
I am confronted in this portion of my work with a great difficulty,
because I cannot afford to be as catholic as I could wish (this
rejection or selection of material being primarily intended for
those
story-tellers dealing with normal children); but I do wish from the
outset to distinguish between a story told to an individual child in
the
home circle or by a personal friend, and a story told to a group of
children as part of the school curriculum. And if I seem to
reiterate
this difference, it is because I wish to show very clearly that the
recital of parents and friends may be quite separate in content and
manner from that offered by the teaching world. In the former case,
almost any subject can be treated, because, knowing the individual
temperament of the child, a wise parent or friend knows also what
can be
presented or not presented to the child; but in dealing with a group
of
normal children in school much has to be eliminated that could be
given
fearlessly to the abnormal child; I mean the child who, by
circumstances
or temperament, is developed beyond his years.
I shall now mention some of the elements which experience has shown
me
to be unsuitable for class stories.
I. Stories dealing with analysis of motive and feeling.
This
warning is specially necessary today, because this is, above all, an
age
of introspection and analysis. We have only to glance at the
principal
novels and plays during the last quarter of a century, more
especially
during the last ten years, to see how this spirit has crept into our
literature and life.
Now, this tendency to analyze is obviously more dangerous for
children
than for adults, because, from lack of experience and knowledge of
psychology, the child's analysis is incomplete. It cannot see all
the
causes of the action, nor can it make that philosophical allowance
for
mood which brings the adult to truer conclusions.
Therefore, we should discourage the child who shows a tendency to
analyze too closely the motives of its action, and refrain from
presenting to them in our stories any example which might encourage
them
to persist in this course.
I remember, on one occasion, when I went to say good night to a
little
girl of my acquaintance, I found her sitting up in bed, very wide-
awake.
Her eyes were shining, her cheeks were flushed, and when I asked her
what had excited her so much, she said:
"I know I have done something wrong today, but I cannot quite
remember what it was."
I said: "But, Phyllis, if you put your hand, which is really quite
small, in front of your eyes, you could not see the shape of
anything
else, however large it might be. Now, what you have done today
appears
very large because it is so close, but when it is a little further
off,
you will be able to see better and know more about it. So let us
wait
till tomorrow morning."
I am happy to say that she took my advice. She was soon fast
asleep,
and the next morning she had forgotten the wrong over which she had
been
unhealthily brooding the night before.
2. Stories dealing too much with sarcasm and satire. These
are
weapons which are too sharply polished, and therefore too dangerous,
to
place in the hands of children. For here again, as in the case of
analysis, they can only have a very incomplete conception of the
case.
They do not know the real cause which produces the apparently
ridiculous
appearance, and it is only the abnormally gifted child or grown-up
person who discovers this by instinct. It takes a lifetime to
arrive at
the position described in Sterne's words: "I would not have let
fallen
an unseasonable pleasantry in the venerable presence of misery to be
entitled to all the with which Rabelais has ever scattered."
I will hasten to add that I should not wish children to have their
sympathy too much drawn out, of their emotions kindled too much to
pity,
because this would be neither healthy nor helpful to themselves or
others. I only want to protect children from the dangerous critical
attitude induced by the use of satire which sacrifices too much of
the
atmosphere of trust and belief in human beings which ought to be an
essential of childlife. By indulging in satire, the sense of
kindness
in children would become perverted, their sympathy cramped, and they
themselves would be old before their time. We have an excellent
example
of this in Hans Christian Andersen's "Snow Queen."
When Kay gets the piece of broken mirror into his eye, he no longer
sees
the world from the normal child's point of view; he can no longer
see
anything but the foibles of those about him, a condition usually
reached
by a course of pessimistic experience.
Andersen sums up the unnatural point of view in these words: "When
Kay tried to repeat the Lord's Prayer, he could only remember the
multiplication table." Now, without taking these words in any
literal
sense, we can admit that they represent the development of the head
at
the expense of the heart.
An example of this kind of story to avoid is Andersen's "Story of
the
Butterfly." The bitterness of the Anemones, the sentimentality of
the
Violets, the schoolgirlishness of the Snowdrops, the domesticity of
the
Sweetpeas—all this tickles the palate of the adult, but does
not
belong to the place of the normal child. Again, I repeat, that the
unusual child may take all this in and even preserve his kindly
attitude
towards the world, but it is dangerous atmosphere for the ordinary
child.
3. Stories of a sentimental character. Strange to say, this
element of sentimentality appeals more to the young teachers than to
the
children themselves. It is difficult to define the difference
between
real sentiment and sentimentality, but the healthy normal boy or
girl
of, let us say, ten or eleven years old, seems to feel it
unconsciously,
though the distinction is not so clear a few years later.
Mrs. Elisabeth McCracken contributed an excellent article some years
ago
to the Outlook on the subject of literature for the young, in
which we find a good illustration of this power of discrimination on
the
part of a child.
A young teacher was telling her pupils the story of the emotional
lady
who, to put her lover to the test, bade him pick up the glove which
she
had thrown down into the arena between the tiger and the lion. The
lover does her bidding in order to vindicate his character as a
brave
knight. One boy after hearing the story at once states his contempt
for
the knight's acquiescence, which he declares to be unworthy.
"But," says the teacher, "you see he really did it to show the lady
how
foolish she was." The answer of the boy sums up what I have been
trying
to show: "There was no sense in his being sillier than she
was, to show her she was silly."
If the boy had stopped there, we might have concluded that he was
lacking in imagination or romance, but his next remark proves what a
balanced and discriminating person he was, for he added: "Now, if
she had fallen in, and he had leapt after her to rescue her,
that
would have been splendid and of some use." Given the character of
the
lady, we might, as adults, question the last part of the boy's
statement, but this is pure cynicism and fortunately does not enter
into
the child's calculations.
In my own personal experience, and I have told this story often in
the
German ballad form to girls of ten and twelve in the high schools in
England, I have never found one girl who sympathized with the lady
or
who failed to appreciate the poetic justice meted out to her in the
end
by the dignified renunciation of the knight.
Chesterton defines sentimentality as "a tame, cold, or small and
inadequate manner of speaking about certain matters which demand
very
large and beautiful expression."
I would strongly urge upon young teachers to revise, by this
definition, some of the stories they have included in their
repertories,
and see whether they would stand the test or not.
4. Stories containing strong sensational episodes. The
danger
of this kind of story is all the greater because many children
delight
in it and some crave for it in the abstract, but fear it in the
concrete.[15]
An affectionate aunt, on one occasion, anxious to curry favor with a
four-year-old nephew, was taxing her imagination to find a story
suitable for his tender years. She was greatly startled when he
suddenly said, in a most imperative tone: "Tell me the story of a
bear
eating a small boy." This was so remote from her own choice of
subject
that she hesitated at first, but coming to the conclusion that as
the
child had chosen the situation he would feel no terror in the
working up
of its details, she a most thrilling and blood-curdling story,
leading
up to the final catastrophe. But just as she reached the great
dramatic
moment, the child raised his hands in terror and said: "Oh! Auntie,
don't let the bear really eat the boy!"
"Don't you know," said an impatient boy who had been listening to a
mild
adventure story considered suitable to his years, "that I don't take
any
interest in the story until the decks are dripping with gore?" Here
we
have no opportunity of deciding whether or not the actual
description
demanded would be more alarming than the listener had realized.
Here is a poem of James Stephens, showing a child's taste for
sensational things:
A man was sitting underneath a tree
Outside the village, and he asked me
What name was upon this place, and said he
Was never here before. He told a
Lot of stories to me too. His nose was flat.
I asked him how it happened, and he said,
The first mate of the Mary Ann done that
With a marling-spike one day, but he was dead,
And a jolly job too, but he'd have gone a long way to have killed
him.
A gold ring in one ear, and the other was bit off by a crocodile,
bedad,
That's what he said: He taught me how to chew.
He was a real nice man. He liked me too.
The taste that is fed by the sensational contents of the newspapers
and
the dramatic excitement of street life, and some of the lurid
representations of the cinematograph, is so much stimulated that the
interest in normal stories is difficult to rouse. I will not here
dwell
on the deleterious effects of over-dramatic stimulation, which has
been
known to lead to crime, since I am keener to prevent the telling of
too
many sensational stories than to suggest a cure when the mischief is
done.
Kate Douglas Wiggin has said:
"Let us be realistic, by all means, but beware, O story-teller, of
being
too realistic. Avoid the shuddering tale of 'the wicked boy who
stoned
the birds,' lest some hearer should be inspired to try the dreadful
experiment and see if it really does kill."
I must emphasize the fact, however, that it is only the excess of
this
dramatic element which I deplore. A certain amount of excitement is
necessary, but this question belongs to the positive side of the
subject, and I shall deal with it later on.
5. Stories presenting matters quite outside the plane of a
child's
interests, unless they are wrapped in mystery. Experience with
children ought to teach us to avoid stories which contain too much
allusion to matters of which the hearers are entirely ignorant.
But
judging from the written stories of today, supposed to be for
children,
it is still a matter of difficulty to realize that this form of
allusion
to "foreign" matters, or making a joke, the appreciation of which
depends solely on a special and "inside" knowledge, is always
bewildering and fatal to sustained dramatic interest.
It is a matter of intense regret that so very few people have
sufficiently clear remembrance of their own childhood to help them
to
understand the taste and point of view of the normal child.
There is a passage in the "Brownies," by Mrs. Ewing, which
illustrates
the confusion created in the child mind by a facetious allusion in a
dramatic moment which needed a more direct treatment. When the
nursery
toys have all gone astray, one little child exclaims joyfully:
"Why, the old Rocking-Horse's nose has turned up in the oven!"
"It couldn't," remarks a tiresome, facetious doctor, far more
anxious to
be funny than to sympathized with the child, "it was the purest
Grecian,
modeled from the Elgin marbles."
Now, for grownup people this is an excellent joke, but for a child
has
not yet become acquainted with these Grecian masterpieces, the whole
remark is pointless and hampering.[16]
6. Stories which appeal to fear or priggishness. This is a
class of story which scarcely counts today and against which the
teacher
does not need a warning, but I wish to make a passing allusion to
these
stories, partly to round off my subject and partly to show that we
have
made some improvement in choice of subject.
When I study the evolution of the story from the crude recitals
offered
to our children within the last hundred years, I feel that, though
our
progress may be slow, it is real and sure. One has only to take
some
examples from the Chaps Books of the beginning of last century to
realize the difference of appeal. Everything offered then was
either an
appeal to fear or to priggishness, and one wonders how it is that
our
grandparents and their parents every recovered from the effects of
such
stories as were offered to them. But there is the consoling thought
that no lasting impression was made upon them, such as I believe
may
be possible by the right kind of story.
I offer a few examples of the old type of story:
Here is an encouraging address offered to children by a certain Mr.
Janeway about the year 1828:
"Dare you do anything which your parents forbid you, and neglect to
do
what they command? Dare you to run up and down on the Lord's Day,
or do
you keep in to read your book, and learn what your good parents
command?"
Such an address would have almost tempted children to envy the lot
of
orphans, except that the guardians and less close relations might
have
been equally, if not more, severe.
From "The Curious Girl," published about 1809:
"Oh! papa, I hope you will have no reason to be dissatisfied with
me,
for I love my studies very much, and I am never so happy at my play
as
when I have been assiduous at my lessons all day."
"Adolphus: How strange it is, papa, you should believe it possible
for
me to act so like a child, now that I am twelve years old!"
Here is a specimen taken from a Chap Book about 1835:
Edward refuses hot bread at breakfast. His hostess asks whether he
likes it.
"Yes, I am extremely fond of it."
"Why did you refuse it?"
"Because I know that my papa does not approve of my eating it. Am I
to
disobey a Father and Mother I love so well, and forget my duty,
because
they are a long way off? I would not touch the cake, were I sure
nobody
would see me. I myself should know it, and that would be
sufficient.
"Nobly replied!" exclaimed Mrs. C. "Act always thus, and you must
be
happy, for although the whole world should refuse the praise that is
due, you must enjoy the approbation of your conscience, which is
beyond
anything else."
Here is a quotation of the same kind from Mrs. Sherwood:
Tender-souled little creatures, desolated by a sense of sin, if they
did
but eat a spoonful of cupboard jam without Mamma's express
permission. .
. . Would a modern Lucy, jealous of her sister Emily's doll, break
out
thus easily into tearful apology for her guilt: 'I know it is wicked
in
me to be sorry that Emily is happy, but I feel that I cannot help
it'?
And would a modern mother retort with heartfelt joy: 'My dear child,
I
am glad you have confessed Now I shall tell you why you feel this
wicked
sorrow'?—proceeding to an account of the depravity of human
nature
so unredeemed by comfort for a childish mind of common intelligence
that
one can scarcely imagine the interview ending in anything less
tragic
than a fit of juvenile hysteria.
Description of a good boy:
A good boy is dutiful to his Father and Mother, obedient to his
master
and loving to his playfellows. He is diligent in learning his book
and
takes a pleasure in improving himself in everything that is worthy
of
praise. He rises early in the morning, makes himself clean and
decent,
and says his prayers. He loves to hear good advice, is thankful to
those who give it and always follows it. He never swears[17] or
calls
names or uses ill words to companions. He is never peevish and
fretful,
always cheerful and good-tempered.
7. Stories of exaggerated and coarse fun. In the chapter on
the
positive side of this subject I shall speak more in detail of the
educational value of robust and virile representation of fun and of
sheer nonsense, but as a preparation to these statements, I should
like
to strike a note of warning against the element of exaggerated and
coarse fun being encouraged in our school stories, partly, because
of
the lack of humor in such presentations (a natural product of
stifling
imagination) and partly, because the strain of the abnormal has the
same
effect as the too frequent use of the melodramatic.
In an article in Macmillans's Magazine, December, 1869, Miss
Yonge writes:
"A taste for buffoonery is much to be discouraged, an exclusive
taste
for extravagance most unwholesome and even perverting. It becomes
destructive of reverence and soon degenerates into coarseness. It
permits nothing poetical or imaginative, nothing sweet or pathetic
to
exist, and there is a certain self-satisfaction and superiority in
making game of what others regard with enthusiasm and sentiment
which
absolutely bars the way against a higher or softer tone."
Although these words were written nearly half a century ago, they
are
so specially applicable today that they seem quite "up-to-date."
Indeed, I think they will hold equally good fifty years hence.
In spite of a strong taste on the part of children for what is ugly
and
brutal, I am sure that we ought to eliminate this element as far as
possible from the school stories, especially among poor children.
Not
because I think children should be protected from all knowledge of
evil,
but because so much of this knowledge comes into their life outside
school that we can well afford to ignore it during school hours. At
the
same time, however, as I shall show by example when I come to the
positive side, it would be well to show children by story
illustration
the difference between brutal ugliness without anything to redeem it
and
surface ugliness, which may be only a veil over the beauty that lies
underneath. It might be possible, for instance, to show children
the
difference between the real ugliness in the priest's face of the
"Laocoon" group, because of the motive of courage and endurance
behind
the suffering. Many stories in everyday life could be found to
illustrate this.
8. Stories of infant piety and death-bed scenes. The
stories
for children forty years ago contained much of this element, and the
following examples will illustrate this point:
Notes from poems written by a child between six and eight years of
age,
by name Philip Freeman, afterwards Archdeacon of Exeter:
Poor Robin, thou canst fly no more,
Thy joys and sorrows all are o'er.
Through Life's tempestuous storms thou'st trod,
But now art sunk beneath the sod.
Here lost and gone poor Robin lies,
He trembles, lingers, falls and dies.
He's gone, he's gone, forever lost,
No more of him they now can boast.
Poor Robin's dangers all are past,
He struggled to the very last.
Perhaps he spent a happy Life,
Without much struggle and much strife.[18]
The prolonged gloom of the main theme is somewhat lightened by the
speculative optimism of the last verse.
Life, transient Life, is but a dream,
Like Sleep which short doth lengthened seem
Till dawn of day, when the bird's lay
Doth charm the soul's first peeping gleam.
Then farewell to the parting year,
Another's come to Nature dear.
In every place, thy brightening face
Does welcome winter's snowy drear.
Alas! our time is much mis-spent.
Then we must haste and now repent.
We have a book in which to look,
For we on Wisdom should be bent.
Should God, the Almighty, King of all,
Before His judgment-seat now call
Us to that place of Joy and Grace
Prepared for us since Adam's fall.
I think there is no doubt that we have made considerable progress in
this matter. Not only do we refrain from telling these highly moral
(sic) stories but we have reached the point of parodying them,
in
sign of ridicule, as, for instance, in such writing as Belloc's
"Cautionary Tales." These would be a trifle too grim for a timid
child,
but excellent fun for adults.
It should be our study today to prove to children that the immediate
importance to them is not to think of dying and going to Heaven, but
of
living and—shall we say?—of going to college, which is a
far
better preparation for the life to come than the morbid dwelling
upon
the possibility of an early death.
In an article signed "Muriel Harris," I think, from a copy of the
Tribune, appeared a delightful article on Sunday books, from
which I
quote the following:
"All very good little children died young in the storybooks, so that
unusual goodness must have been the source of considerable anxiety
to
affectionate parents. I came across a little old book the other day
called 'Examples for Youth.' On the yellow fly-leaf was written, in
childish, carefully-sloping hand: 'Presented to Mary Palmer Junior,
by
her sister, to be read on Sundays,' and was dated 1828. The
accounts
are taken from a work on "Piety Promoted,' and all of them begin
with
unusual piety in early youth and end with the death-bed of the
little
paragon, and his or her dying words."
9. Stories containing a mixture of fairy tale and science.
By
this combination one loses what is essential to each, namely, the
fantastic on the one side, and accuracy on the other. The true
fairy
tale should be unhampered by any compromise of probability even; the
scientific representation should be sufficiently marvelous along its
own
lines to need no supernatural aid. Both appeal to the imagination
in
different ways.
As an exception to this kind of mixture, I should quote "The Honey
Bee,
and Other Stories," translated from the Danish of Evald by C. G.
Moore
Smith. There is a certain robustness in these stories dealing with
the
inexorable laws of Nature. Some of them will appear hard to the
child
but they will be of interest to all teachers.
Perhaps the worst element in the choice of stories is that which
insists
upon the moral detaching itself and explaining the story. In "Alice
in
Wonderland" the Duchess says, "'And the moral of that is:
Take
care of the sense and the sounds will take care of themselves.' "How
fond she is of finding morals in things," thought Alice to herself."
(This gives the point of view of the child.)
The following is a case in point, found in a rare old print in the
British Museum:
Jane S. came home with her clothes soiled and hands badly torn.
"Where have you been?" asked her mother.
"I fell down the bank near the mill," said Jane, "and I should have
been
drowned, if Mr. M. had not seen me and pulled me out."
"Why did you go so near the edge of the brink?"
"There was a pretty flower there that I wanted, and I only meant to
take
one step, but I slipped and fell down.
Moral: Young people often take but one step in sinful
indulgence
[Poor Jane!], but they fall into soul-destroying sins. They can do
it
by a single act of sin. [The heinous act of picking a flower!] They
do
it; but the act leads to another, and they fall into the gulf of
Perdition, unless God interposes.
Now, quite apart from the folly of this story we must condemn it on
moral grounds. Could we imagine a lower standard of a Deity than
that
presented here to the child?
Today the teacher would commend Jane for a laudable interest in
botany,
but might add a word of caution about choosing inclined planes in
the
close neighborhood of a body of running water as a hunting ground
for
specimens and a popular, lucid explanation of the inexorable law of
gravity.
Here we have an instance of applying a moral when we have finished
our
story, but there are many stories where nothing is left to chance in
this matter and where there is no means for the child to use
ingenuity
or imagination in making out the meaning for himself.
Henry Morley has condemned the use of this method as applied to
fairy
stories. He says: "Moralizing in a fairy story is like the snoring
ofBottom in Titania's lap."
But I think this applies to all stories, and most especially to
those by
which we do wish to teach something.
John Burroughs says in his article, "Thou Shalt Not Preach":[19]
"Didactic fiction can never rank high. Thou shalt not preach or
teach;
thou shalt portray and create, and have ends as universal as nature.
. .
. What Art demands is that the artist's personal convictions and
notions, his likes and dislikes, do not obtrude themselves at all;
that
good and evil stand judged in his work by the logic of events, as
they
do in nature, and not by any special pleading on his part. He does
non
hold a brief for either side; he exemplifies the working of the
creative
energy. . . . The great artist works in and through
and from moral ideas; his works are indirectly a criticism of life.
He
is moral without having a moral. The moment a moral obtrudes
itself,
that moment he begins to fall from grace as an artist. . . . The
great
distinction of Art is that it aims to see life steadily and to see
it
whole. . . . It affords the one point of view whence the world
appears
harmonious and complete."
It would seem, then, from this passage, that it is of moral
importance to put things dramatically.
In Froebel's "Mother Play" he demonstrates the educational value of
stories, emphasizing that their highest use consists in their
ability to
enable the child, through suggestion, to form a pure and
noble
idea of what a man may be or do. The sensitiveness of a child's
mind is
offended if the moral is forced upon him, but if he absorbs it
unconsciously, he has received its influence for all time.
To me the idea of pointing out the moral of the story has always
seemed
as futile as tying a flower on a stalk instead of letting the flower
grow out of the stalk, as Nature has intended. In the first case,
the
flower, showy and bright for the moment, soon fades away. In the
second
instance, it develops slowly, coming to perfection in fullness of
time
because of the life within.
Lastly, the element to avoid is that which rouses emotions which
cannot
be translated into action.
Mr. Earl Barnes, to whom all teachers owe a debt of gratitude for
the
inspiration of his educational views, insists strongly on this
point.
The sole effect of such stories is to produce a form of hysteria,
fortunately short-lived, but a waste of force which might be
directed
into a better channel.[20] Such stories are so easy to recognize
that
it would be useless to make a formal list, but I make further
allusion
to them, in dealing with stories from the lives of the saints.
These, then, are the main elements to avoid in the selection of
material
suitable for normal children. Much might be added in the way of
detail,
and the special tendency of the day may make it necessary to avoid
one
class of story more than another, but this care belongs to another
generation of teachers and parents.
ELEMENTS TO SEEK IN CHOICE OF MATERIAL
In his "Choice of Books," Frederic Harrison has said: "The most
useful
help to reading is to know what we shall not read, what we
shall
keep from that small, cleared spot in the overgrown jungle of
information which we can call our ordered patch of fruit-bearing
knowledge."
Now, the same statement applies to our stories, and, having busied
myself during the last chapter with "clearing my small spot" by
cutting
away a mass of unfruitful growth, I am no going to suggest what
would be
the best kind of seed to sow in the patch which I have "reclaimed
from
the jungle."
Again, I repeat, I have no wish to be dogmatic and in offering
suggestions as to the stories to be told, I am catering only for a
group
of normal school children. My list of subjects does not pretend to
cover the whole ground of children's needs, and just as I exclude
the
abnormal or unusual child from the scope of my warning in subjects
to
avoid, so do I also exclude that child from the limitation in choice
of
subjects to be sought, because you can offer almost any subject to
the
unusual child, especially if you stand in close relation to him and
know
his powers of apprehension. In this matter, age has very little to
say;
it is a question of the stage of development.
Experience has taught me that for the group of normal children,
irrespective of age, the first kind of story suitable for them will
contain an appeal to conditions to which the child is accustomed.
The
reason for this is obvious: the child, having limited experience,
can
only be reached by this experience, until his imagination is
awakened
and he is enabled to grasp through this faculty what he has not
actually
passed through. Before this awakening has taken place he enters the
realm of fiction, represented in the story, by comparison with his
personal experience. Every story and every point in the story mean
more
as that experience widens, and the interest varies, of course, with
temperament, quickness of perception, power of visualizing and of
concentration.
In "The Marsh King's Daughter," Hans Christian Andersen says:
"The storks have a great many stories which they tell their little
ones,
all about the bogs and marshes. They suit them to their age and
capacity. The young ones are quite satisfied with kribble,
krabble,
or some such nonsense, and find it charming; but the elder ones
want something with more meaning."
One of the most interesting experiments to be made in connection
with
this subject is to tell the same story at intervals of a year or six
months to an individual child.[21] The different incidents in the
story
which appeal to him (and one must watch it closely, to be sure the
interest is real and not artificially stimulated by any suggestion
on
one's own part) will mark his mental development and the gradual
awakening of his imagination. This experiment is a very delicate
one
and will not be infallible, because children are secretive and the
appreciation is often simulated (unconsciously) or concealed through
shyness or want of articulation. But it is, in spite of this, a
deeply
interesting and helpful experiment.
To take a concrete example: Let us suppose the story Andersen's "Tin
Soldier" told to a child of five or six years. At the first
recital,
the point which will interest the child most will be the setting up
of
the tin soldiers on the table, because he can understand this by
means
of his own experience, in his own nursery. It is an appeal to
conditions to which he is accustomed and for which no exercise of
the
imagination is needed, unless we take the effect of memory to be,
according to Queyrat, retrospective imagination.
The next incident that appeals is the unfamiliar behavior of the
toys,
but still in familiar surroundings; that is to say, the unusual
activities are carried on in the safe precincts of the nursery
—the
usual atmosphere of the child.
I quote from the text:
Late in the evening the other soldiers were put in their box, and
the
people of the house went to bed. Now was the time for the toys to
play;
they amused themselves with paying visits, fighting battles and
giving
balls. The tin soldiers rustled about in their box, for they wanted
to
join the games, but they could not get the lid off. The nut-
crackers
turned somersaults, and the pencil scribbled nonsense on the slate.
Now, from this point onwards in the story, the events will be quite
outside the personal experience of the child and there will have to
be a
real stretch of imagination to appreciate the thrilling and blood-
curdling adventures of the tin soldier, namely, the terrible sailing
down the gutter under the bridge, the meeting with the fierce rat
who
demands the soldier's passport, the horrible sensation in the fish's
body, etc. Last of all, perhaps, will come the appreciation of the
best
qualities of the hero: his modesty, his dignity, his reticence, his
courage and his constancy. He seems to combine all the qualities of
the
best soldier with those of the best civilian, without the more
obvious
qualities which generally attract first. As for the love story, we
must
expect any child to see its tenderness and beauty, though the
individual child may intuitively appreciate these qualities, but it
is
not what we wish for or work for at this period of child life.
This method could be applied to various stories. I have chosen the
"Tin
Soldier" because of its dramatic qualities and because it is marked
off,
probably quite unconsciously on the part of Andersen, into periods
which
correspond to the child's development.
In Eugene Field's exquisite little poem of "The Dinkey Bird," we
find
the objects familiar to the child in unusual places, so that
some
imagination is needed to realize that "big red sugar-plums are
clinging
to the cliffs beside the sea"; but the introduction of the fantastic
bird and the soothing sound of amfalula tree are new and delightful
sensations, quite out of the child's personal experience.
Another such instance is to be found in Mrs. W. K. Clifford's story
of
"Master Willie." The abnormal behavior of familiar objects, such as
a
doll, leads from the ordinary routine to the paths of adventure.
This
story is to be found in a little book called "Very Short Stories," a
most interesting collection for teachers and children.
We now come to the second element we should seek in material,
namely,
the element of the unusual, which we have already anticipated in the
story of the "Tin Soldier."
This element is necessary in response to the demand of the child who
expressed the needs of his fellow-playmates when he said: "I want to
go
to the place where the shadows are real." This is the true
definition
of "faerie" lands and is the first sign of real mental development
in
the child when he is no longer content with the stories of his own
little deeds and experiences, when his ear begins to appreciate
sounds
different from the words in his own everyday language, and when he
begins to separate his own personality from the action of the story.
George Goschen says:
"What I want for the young are books and stories which do not simply
deal with our daily life. I like the fancy even of little children
to
have some larger food than images of their own little lives, and I
confess I am sorry for the children whose imaginations are not
sometimes
stimulated by beautiful fairy tales which carry them to worlds
different
from those in which their future will be passed. . . . I hold that
what
removes them more or less from their daily life is better than what
reminds them of it at every step."[22]
It is because of the great value of leading children to something
beyond
the limited circle of their own lives that I deplore the twaddling
boarding-school stories written for girls and the artificially
prepared
public school stories for boys. Why not give them the dramatic
interest
of a larger stage? No account of a cricket match or a football
triumph
could present a finer appeal to boys and girls than the description
of
the Peacestead in the "Heroes of Asgaard":
"This was the playground of the Æsir, where they practiced
trials
of skill one with another and held tournaments and sham fights.
These
last were always conducted in the gentlest and most honorable
manner;
for the strongest law of the Peacestead was that no angry blow
should be
struck or spiteful word spoken upon the sacred field."
For my part, I would unhesitatingly give to boys and girls an
element of
strong romance in the stories which are told them even before they
are
twelve.
Miss Sewell says:
"The system that keeps girls in the schoolroom reading simple
stories,
without reading Scott and Shakespeare and Spenser, and then hands
them
over to the unexplored recesses of the Circulating Library, has been
shown to be the most frivolizing that can be devised." She sets
forth
as the result of her experience that a good novel, especially a
romantic
one, read at twelve or fourteen, is really a beneficial thing.
At present, so many of the children from the elementary schools get
their first idea of love, if one can give it such a name from vulgar
pictures displayed in the shop windows or jokes on marriage, culled
from
the lowest type of paper, or the proceedings of a divorce court.
What an antidote to such representation might be found in the
stories of
Hector and Andromache, Siegfried and Brünnehilde, Dido and
Æ
neas, Orpheus and Eurydice, St. Francis and St. Clare!
One of the strongest elements we should introduce into our stories
for
children of all ages is that which calls forth love of beauty. And
the
beauty should stand out, not only in the delineation of noble
qualities
in our heroes and heroines, but in the beauty and strength of
language
and form.
In this latter respect, the Bible stories are of such inestimable
value;
all the greater because a child is familiar with the subject and the
stories gain fresh significance from the spoken or winged word as
compared with the mere reading. As to whether we should keep to the
actual text is a matter of individual experience. Professor R. G.
Moulton, whose interpretations of the Bible stories are so well
known
both in England and America, does not always confine himself to the
actual text, but draws the dramatic elements together, rejecting
what
seems to him to break the narrative, but introducing the actual
language
where it is the most effective. Those who have heard him will
realize
the success of his method.
There is one Bible story which can be told with scarcely any
deviation
from the text, if only a few hints are given beforehand, and that is
the
story of Nebuchadnezzar and the Golden Image. Thus, I think it
wise, if
the children are to succeed in partially visualizing the story, that
they should have some idea of the dimensions of the Golden Image as
it
would stand out in a vast plain. It might be well to compare those
dimension with some building with which the child is familiar. In
London, the matter is easy as the height will compare, roughly
speaking,
with Westminster Abbey. The only change in text I should adopt is
to
avoid the constant enumeration of the list of rulers and the musical
instruments. In doing this, I am aware that I am sacrificing
something
of beauty in the rhythm, but, on the other hand, for narrative
purpose
the interest is not broken. The first time the announcement is
made,
that is, by the Herald, it should be in a perfectly loud, clear and
toneless voice, such as you would naturally use when shouting
through a
trumpet to a vast concourse of people scattered over a wide plain,
reserving all the dramatic tone of voice for the passage where
Nebuchadnezzar is making the announcement to the three men by
themselves. I can remember Professor Moulton saying that all the
dramatic interest of the story is summed up in the words "But if not
. .
." This suggestion is a very helpful one, for it enables us to work
up
gradually to this point, and then, as it were, unwind, until
we
reach the words of Nebuchadnezzar's dramatic recantation.
In this connection, it is a good plan occasionally during the story
hour
to introduce really good poetry, which delivered in a dramatic
manner
(far removed, of course, from the melodramatic), might give children
their first love of beautiful form in verse. And I do not think it
necessary to wait for this. Even the normal child of seven, though
there is nothing arbitrary in the suggestion of this age, will
appreciate the effect, if only on the ear, of beautiful lines well
spoken. Mahomet has said, in his teaching advice: "Teach your
children
poetry: it opens the mind, lends grace to wisdom and makes heroic
virtues hereditary."
To begin with the youngest children of all, here is a poem which
contains a thread of story, just enough to give a human interest:
MILKING-TIME
When the cows come home, the milk is coming;
Honey's made when the bees are humming.
Duck, drake on the rushy lake,
And the deer live safe in the breezy brake,
And timid, funny, pert little bunny
Winks his nose, and sits all sunny.—CHRISTINA ROSSETTI.
Now, in comparing this poem with some of the doggerel verse offered
to
small children, one is struck with the literary superiority in the
choice of words. Here, in spite of the simplicity of the poem,
there is
not the ordinary limited vocabulary, nor the forced rhyme, nor the
application of a moral, by which the artist falls from grace.
Again, Eugene Field's "Hushaby Lady," of which the language is most
simple, yet the child is carried away by the beauty of the sound.
I remember hearing some poetry repeated by the children in one of
the
elementary schools in Sheffield which made me feel that they had
realized romantic possibilities which would prevent their lives from
ever becoming quite prosaic again, and I wish that this practice
were
more usual. There is little difficulty with the children. I can
remember, in my own experience as a teacher in London, making the
experiment of reading or repeating passages from Milton and
Shakespeare
to children from nine to eleven years of age, and the enthusiastic
way
they responded by learning those passages by heart. I have taken
with
several sets of children such passages from Milton as the "Echo
Song,"
"Sabrina," "By the Rushy-fringed Bank," "Back, Shepherds, Back,"
from
"Comus"; "May Morning," "Ode to Shakespeare," "Samson," "On His
Blindness," etc. I even ventured on several passage from "Paradise
Lost," and found "Now came still evening on" a particular favorite
with
the children.
It seemed even easier to interest them in Shakespeare, and they
learned
quite readily and easily many passages from "As You Like It," "The
Merchant of Venice," "Julius Cæsar," "Richard II," "Henry IV,"
and
"Henry V."
The method I should recommend in the introduction of both poets
occasionally into the story-hour would be threefold. First, to
choose
passages which appeal for beauty of sound or beauty of mental vision
called up by those sounds; such as "Tell me where is Fancy bred,"
"Titania's Lullaby," "How sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this
bank."
Secondly, passages for sheer interest of content, such as the Trial
Scene from "The Merchant of Venice," or the Forest Scene in "As You
Like
It." Thirdly, for dramatic and historical interest, such as, "Men
at
some time are masters of their fates," the whole of Mark Antony's
speech, and the scene with Imogen and her foster brothers in the
Forest.
It may not be wholly out of place to add here that the children
learned
and repeated these passages themselves, and that I offered them the
same
advice as I do to all story-tellers. I discussed quite openly with
them
the method I considered best, trying to make them see that
simplicity of
delivery was not only the most beautiful but the most effective
means to
use and, by the end of a few months, when they had been allowed to
experiment and express themselves, they began to see that mere
ranting
was not force and that a sense of reserve power is infinitely more
impressive and inspiring than mere external presentation.
I encouraged them to criticize each other for the common good, and
sometimes I read a few lines with overemphasis and too much gesture,
which they were at liberty to point out that they might avoid the
same
error.
Excellent collections of poems for this purpose of narrative are:
Mrs. P. A. Barnett's series of "Song and Story," published by Adam
Black, and "The Posy Ring," chosen and classified by Kate Douglas
Wiggin
and Nora Archibald Smith, published by Doubleday. For older
children,
"The Call of the Homeland," selected and arranged by Dr. R. P. Scott
and
Katharine T. Wallas, published by Houghton, Mifflin, and "Golden
Numbers," chosen and classified by Kate Douglas Wiggin and Nora
Archibald Smith, published by Doubleday.
I think it is well to have a goodly number of stories illustrating
the
importance of common-sense and resourcefulness.
For this reason, I consider the stories treating of the ultimate
success
of the youngest son[23] very admirable for the purpose, because the
youngest child who begins by being considered inferior to the older
ones
triumphs in the end, either from resourcefulness or from common-
sense or
from some higher quality, such as kindness to animals, courage in
overcoming difficulties, etc.[24]
Thus, we have the story of Cinderella. The cynic might imagine that
it
was the diminutive size of her foot that insured her success. The
child
does not realize any advantage in this, but, though the matter need
not
be pressed, the story leaves us with the impression that Cinderella
had
been patient and industrious, and forbearing with her sisters. We
know
that she was strictly obedient to her godmother, and in order to be
this
she makes her dramatic exit from the ball which is the beginning of
her
triumph. There are many who might say that these qualities do not
meet
with reward in life and that they end in establishing a habit of
drudgery, but, after all, we must have poetic justice in a fairy
story,
occasionally, at any rate, even if the child is confused by the
apparent
contradiction.
Such a story is "Jesper and the Hares." Here, however, it is not at
first resourcefulness that helps the hero, but sheer kindness of
heart,
which prompts him first to help the ants, and then to show civility
to
the old woman, without for a moment expecting any material benefit
from
such actions. At the end, he does win on his own ingenuity and
resourcefulness, and if we regret that his trickery has such
wonderful
results, we must remember the aim was to win the princess for
herself,
and that there was little choice left him. I consider that the end
of
this story is one of the most remarkable I have found in my long
years
of browsing among fairy tales. I should suggest stopping at the
words:
"The Tub is full," as any addition seems to destroy the subtlety of
the
story.[25]
Another story of this kind, admirable for children from six years
and
upwards, is, "What the Old Man Does is Always Right." Here,
perhaps,
the entire lack of common-sense on the part of the hero would serve
rather as a warning than a stimulating example, but the conduct of
the
wife in excusing the errors of her foolish husband is a model of
resourcefulness.
In the story of "Hereafter-this,"[26] we have just the converse: a
perfectly foolish wife shielded by a most patient and forbearing
husband, whose tolerance and common-sense save the situation.
One of the most important elements to seek in our choice of stories
is
that which tends to develop, eventually, a fine sense of humor in a
child. I purposely use the word, "eventually," because I realize,
first, that humor has various stages, and that seldom, if ever, can
one
expect an appreciation of fine humor from a normal child, that is,
from
an elemental mind. It seems as if the rough-and-tumble element were
almost a necessary stage through which children must pass, and which
is
a normal and healthy stage; but up to now we have quite
unnecessarily
extended the period of elephantine fun, and, though we cannot
control
the manner in which children are catered to along this line in their
homes, we can restrict the folly of appealing too strongly or too
long
to this elemental faculty in our schools. Of course, the temptation
is
strong because the appeal is so easy, but there is a tacit
recognition
that horseplay and practical jokes are no longer considered as an
essential part of a child's education. We note this in the changed
attitude in the schools, taken by more advanced educators, towards
bullying, fagging, hazing, etc. As a reaction, then, from more
obvious
fun, there should be a certain number of stories which make appeal
to a
more subtle element, and in the chapter on the questions put to me
by
teachers on various occasions I speak more in detail as to the
educational value of a finer humor in our stories.
At some period there ought to be presented in our stories the
superstitions connected with the primitive history of the race,
dealing
with the fairy proper, giants, dwarfs, gnomes, nixies, brownies and
other elemental beings. Andrew Lang says: "Without our savage
ancestors
we should have had no poetry. Conceive the human race born into the
world in its present advanced condition, weighing, analyzing,
examining
everything. Such a race would have been destitute of poetry and
flattened by common-sense. Barbarians did the dreaming of
the
world."
But it is a question of much debate among educators as to what
should be
the period of the child's life in which these stories are to be
presented. I, myself, was formerly of the opinion that they
belonged to
the very primitive age of the individual, just as they belong to the
primitive age of the race, but experience in telling stories has
taught
me to compromise.
Some people maintain that little children, who take things with
brutal
logic, ought not to be allowed the fairy tale in its more limited
form
of the supernatural; whereas, if presented to older children, this
material can be criticized, catalogued and (alas!) rejected as
worthless, or retained with flippant toleration.
While realizing a certain value in this point of view, I am bound to
admit that if we regulate our stories entirely on this basis, we
lose
the real value of the fairy tale element. It is the one element
which
causes little children to wonder, simply because no
scientific
analysis of the story can be presented to them. It is somewhat
heartrending to feel that "Jack and the Bean Stalk" and stories of
that
ilk are to be handed over to the critical youth who will condemn the
quick growth of the tree as being contrary to the order of nature,
and
wonder why Jack was not playing football on the school team
instead of climbing trees in search of imaginary adventures.
A wonderful plea for the telling of early superstitions to children
is
to be found in an old Indian allegory called, "The Blazing Mansion."
An old man owned a large rambling Mansion. The pillars were rotten,
the
galleries tumbling down, the thatch dry and combustible, and there
was
only one door. Suddenly, one day, there was a smell of fire: the
old
man rushed out. To his horror he saw that the thatch was aflame,
the
rotten pillars were catching fire one by one, and the rafters were
burning like tinder. But, inside, the children went on amusing
themselves quite happily. The distracted Father said: "I will run
in
and save my children. I will seize them in my strong arms, I will
bear
them harmless through the falling rafters and the blazing beams."
Then
the sad thought came to him that the children were romping and
ignorant.
"If I say the house is on fire, they will not understand me. If I
try
to seize them, they will romp about and try to escape. Alas! not a
moment to be lost!" Suddenly a bright thought flashed across the
old
man's mind. "My children are ignorant," he said; "they love toys
and
glittering playthings. I will promise them playthings of unheard-of
beauty. Then they will listen."
So the old man shouted: "Children, come out of the house and see
these
beautiful toys! Chariots with white oxen, all gold and tinsel. See
these exquisite little antelopes. Whoever saw such goats as these?
Children, children come quickly, or they will all be gone!"
Forth from the blazing ruin the children came in hot haste. The
word,
"plaything," was almost the only word they could understand.
Then the Father, rejoiced that his offspring were freed from peril,
procured for them one of the most beautiful chariots ever seen. The
chariot had a canopy like a pagoda; it had tiny rails and
balustrades
and rows of jingling bells. Milk-white oxen drew the chariot. The
children were astonished when they were placed inside.[27]
Perhaps, as a compromise, one might give the gentler superstitions
to
very small children, and leave such a blood-curdling story as
"Bluebeard" to a more robust age.
There is one modern method which has always seemed to me much to be
condemned, and that is the habit of changing the end of a story, for
fear of alarming the child. This is quite indefensible. In doing
this
we are tampering with folklore and confusing stages of development.
Now, I know that there are individual children that, at a tender
age,
might be alarmed at such a story, for instance, as "Little Red
Riding-
Hood"; in which case, it is better to sacrifice the "wonder stage"
and
present the story later on.
I live in dread of finding one day a bowdlerized form of
"Bluebeard,"
prepared for a junior standard, in which, to produce a satisfactory
finale, all the wives come to life again, and |